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谁会这道题：短文改错。 请

短文改错。 请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan . I ask my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspaper s after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. _______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

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