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麻烦老师解答：短文改错。 假如

短文改错。 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中有10处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词. 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词. 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分. We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low-carbon life. First, we'd better turn off lights if possibly and spent less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Save water also matters a lot. Beside, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some of them, which will surely benefit from us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchief instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contribute to a clean world.

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