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在线求指导：短文改错。 假

短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分 Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: "This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute." Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager's office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. "Do you need a typist?" asked Rose. "Yes!" he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn't help saying, "OK! How much will you pay for me every month?" The manager thought for a while and said, "I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month." Rose smiled and answer, "Great! I will come and work here three months late." The manager was speechless. _____________________________________________________________________________

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