Question

谁会这道题：短文改错。

短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共 有l0 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线( ＼) 划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad. When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was so amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad said, I chewed a piece of gum.

Answer 1

The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.                           1.去掉 When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating                                                                                                 2. were                       3. seated on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was                                                                                                                   4.baggage so amazed ! When the plane flew up into∧sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much     5.amazing                                         6. the                                                       7. so that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my                                                                                                                                            8.去掉 tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad                       9. chew                                                                                             10. what said, I chewed a piece of gum.