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求老师解答：短文改错 假定

短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Dear Abby, How are you？I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education.Three hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them.Therefore, my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely and will not be used to the climate here.They can't imagine a young girl like me live alone.They advise me to study in the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How could I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? __________________________________________________________________________

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