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麻烦老师解答：书面表达。

书面表达。 高三伊始，许多家长用金钱、旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学。 假定你是高三学生李华，请针对这一现象，给某英文报社写封短信，陈述你的观点。 要点：(1) 简要陈述这一社会现象； (2) 分析这种现象的负面影响； (3) 你的建议。 注意：(1) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2) 词数100左右。短信开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Editor, With the college entrance examination around the corner, _______________________ _________________________________________________________________________

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One possible version: Dear Editor,      With the college entrance examination around the corner, many parents try to encourage their children to study hard to be admitted into a famous university. They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money, travelling and so on once they achieve the goals.      However, I don't think this is a proper way. Firstly, it may lead to the tact that children's attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying. Secondly, they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want. I think a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good university. We should also study hard and well for our future.                                                                                                                                        Yours truly,                                                                                                                                        Li Hua