英语作文90字左右
写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
Look ,I have a nice room .Come and have a look .It’s small and nice .
There is a big bed ,a small desk ,a shelf and a closet .The bed is near the desk .
There is a shelf near the closet too .Many good books are in the shelf .I like the books very much .
Oh ,yes ,There is a big board on the wall .I often write and draw pictures on the board .
Oh ,My bedroom is too beautiful .
I like it very much .Do you like my bedroom?Can you tell me about your beroom ,please.
看,我有一个漂亮的房间。过来看看。它又小又漂亮。
有一张大床,一张小书桌,一个架子和一个壁橱。床靠近书桌。
壁橱附近也有一个书架。书架上有很多好书。我非常喜欢这些书。
哦,是的,墙上有一块大木板。我经常在上面写字和画画。
哦,我的卧室太漂亮了。
我非常喜欢。你喜欢我的卧室吗?你能告诉我你的卧室吗。
2013-09-17
2013-09-17
I'm Wang Ping, the fan of your program “School English”. I really like watching this Program. I think this is the best program for learning English In the country, because I have learnt a lot of vocabulary through watching it, and it also helps me improving my listening and reading skills. Here are some of my advices, I think that you can bring more stuffs such as English games, music, movies to the program that will be more interesting. Anyway, I hope you guys will be the best team of English program in China.