Question

怎么改写一篇英语作文:我想要的生活

Answer 1

I want a more enjoyable school life.
Suggested questi:
1) How is your school life now?
2) Do you want some changes about your school life?
3) What changes would you like to have about your school life?

My shool life isn't interesting enough. I want to have a more enjoyable school life. I hope to have more meaningful activities.For example,we can help some old people who live near our school. I would like to have more books and magazines in our library,so that we can read more and learn more. I'm sure my school life will be more enjoyable,colourful and meaningful.(Total: 68 words)
(Written by Huang Huixian from Class 2, Grade 7)

Nowadays, my school life is very dull.
I want some changes about it. I would like to have a big library in our school.Then we can read more books in our spare time. I would like to have more meaningful activities and have more plants around the playground. I think our school will be more enjoyable.
I hope to change our school life.
(Written by Lu Yunjie from Class2, Grade7)

I think my school life is uninteresting. So I want some changes about it. I would like to have less homework so that we can have more free time to read books and have more sports. I think it can help us study better. I'd also like to have a bigger classroom for us to study in, because it is too small now.
(Written by Sun Zihan from Class2, Grade7)

I want a more enjoyable school life
My school life is dull and I want some changes about my school life. I would like to have more activities to other places. I would like to have less homework and more computer less as well. I would like to have more plants in our school,too. As you can see,a more enjoyable school life can make us study happily. (Total: 60 words)
(Written by Sun Yaoyao from Class 2, Grade 7)

I want a more enjoyable school life
My school life is uninteresting.I want to make some changes. I would like to have a fountain at the school gate.It would be wonderful.I would like to have more plants around the playground.The view will be beautiful.I also want to have an air conditioner in our classroom.It will be comfortable to stay in such a room in summer.Let’s try our best to make our school better.
(Total: 66 words) (Written by Ann Gu from Class 2, Grade 7)

I want a more enjoyable school life
An enjoyable school life can make us study more efficiently. I think my school life is enjoyable now, but there are still two shortcomings .One is about our playground, it’s too small to play football freely. The other one is so few display boards, that we can’t know news immediately.
All of above, more school equipments will make our school life more enjoyable.
(Written by Tang Ziqiu)

I want a more enjoyable school life
My school life isn’t very interesting now. So I want some changes about my school life.
First, I’d like to have a bigger library. There will be more books and magazines in the library. Then I would like to have more language less so that we can learn other languages such as Japanese and Korean. Finally, I’d like to have more activities and trips to other places. We can also learn something from them.
In a word, I hope my school life will be more enjoyable and interesting.
(Written by Cheng Yiqing from Class 2 Grade 7)