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只找到不同地区的 不过万变不离其宗 看看也不错 2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论了一个话题：the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。注意：1.开头和结尾部分已写好。2.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。4.词数：70个左右。His ideas1. reading English newspapers2. talking with friends in English3. seeing English films2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 Mr Nunan,Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.Liu Mei点评：本文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了Allen的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作50年，幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。请以Sports in Our School为题给校刊写一篇报道。内容要点提示：1. time for sports2. kinds of sports3. change of students’ health and study4. change of school life要求：1.80词左右，可适当发挥。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games，running，and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.点评：本文要点非常齐全，三段话分别叙述了题目中要求的四个方面，层次清楚，段与段之间的连接也很自然。第一段主要讲我们学校的运动课和运动时间发生了很大的变化，第二段是讲同学都很积极地参加运动，第三段主要讲运动给校园生活带来的变化。本文最大的特点就是每一个的开头都是一个中心句，这样使得文章大意非常明了，结构也很清晰。
2005年北京中考英语满分作文 根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, 2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 提示：阅读理解B篇文章的情节使我们感动。你一定也收到过许多礼物，其中你最喜欢的礼物总会不断地呈现在你的记忆中，它可能来自于你的亲人，朋友或老师，在礼物中有他们对你的爱和期待，请你以“A Gift”为题，用英语写一篇小短文，叙述你收到礼物后得到的启示和你的感动之情。要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60字。2. 文章中不得出现你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。3. 短文必须写在答题卷上，如在本卷中作答，一律不得分。2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 A GiftI have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.点评：作者开门见山地点出了自己最喜欢的礼物，然后详细地阐述了这份礼物的来源和为什么喜欢这份礼物的原因。最后作者表达了自己的希望。本文内容很完整，作者层层深入，娓娓道来，展现了一位中学生的叙事功底。在语言方面，本文长短句结合，增加了语言的多样化。 2007年沈阳市中考英语满分作文范文 The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school，because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters.The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard，because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.点评：同样，这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅，基本无语法错误，作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇，如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。 2007年天津市中考英语满分作文范文 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.点评：作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚，表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时，常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀，没有连续性，而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题，运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。
2005年北京中考英语满分作文 根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, 2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 提示：阅读理解B篇文章的情节使我们感动。你一定也收到过许多礼物，其中你最喜欢的礼物总会不断地呈现在你的记忆中，它可能来自于你的亲人，朋友或老师，在礼物中有他们对你的爱和期待，请你以“A Gift”为题，用英语写一篇小短文，叙述你收到礼物后得到的启示和你的感动之情。要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60字。2. 文章中不得出现你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。3. 短文必须写在答题卷上，如在本卷中作答，一律不得分。2007年昆明市中考英语满分作文范文 A GiftI have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.点评：作者开门见山地点出了自己最喜欢的礼物，然后详细地阐述了这份礼物的来源和为什么喜欢这份礼物的原因。最后作者表达了自己的希望。本文内容很完整，作者层层深入，娓娓道来，展现了一位中学生的叙事功底。在语言方面，本文长短句结合，增加了语言的多样化。 2007年沈阳市中考英语满分作文范文 The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school，because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters.The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard，because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.点评：同样，这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅，基本无语法错误，作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇，如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。 2007年天津市中考英语满分作文范文 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.点评：作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚，表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时，常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀，没有连续性，而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题，运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。
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How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
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