Question

求这篇英语改错的答案

Answer 1

Aysha went to the school（没有a） in Kabul.This schol was knownfor it's poor education. It was very easy for her to drop out .She might have been exactly like that nothing had happened.At the beginning of the second grade, her aunt bought her a book called Harry Potter.It was so interesting that she read it several times.It encouraged her to discover the story behind J.K.Rowling's success.She learned how J.K.Rowling started with nothing and then became one of the richest woman in the world J.K.Rowling had a great influence on Aysha. From then on,she worked and wished that she would beableto being the same with J.K.Rowling. she is the manager of a big company in her town. 望采纳(*^__^*)

Answer 2

1.   a 去掉

2. its 意思是它的，不能用it is 或者it's

3. out of

4. 去掉whether

   6. called，  too改成so

    

7. encouraged

9. 去掉from

10 women

12. hard

13 the same as， 不是 with

  

Answer 3

1. it's ,its 2.drop out ,drop out of 3.whether, if 4.calling, called 5.too,so 6.encourages,encouraged

   7.learned from,learned  8woman,women 9hardly,hard 10.the same with,the same as

   答案绝对正确

Answer 4

this 改为the;drop out 后面加of；might改为must; like 改为liked;calling-called;too-so;encourages-encouraged;form删除；hardly-hard；with-as;

Answer 5

答案更新中
school
it is
drop out of school
whether变成as
called
so exciting
encouraged
women
worked hard
the same as

追问

能不能详细点，比如哪里改成哪里？be quick,money is yours！

追答

没问题，稍等
1a school在这里不用特殊强调，因为没有说是某个学校，只是一个地区的学习不加冠词
2is 是谓语动词，句子必须有谓语才是句子
3从学校辍学需要加上of ，否则不加school
4whether表示选择性的这里有原因的意思，不过不是很确定对不对
5一本书的名字用called，表示叫做什么名字的什么东西，被动
6so that从句，too to连用，这本书如此有趣以至于她看了那么多次
7全文用过去时态
8one of 后面是复数，woman变成women
9hard就是副词修饰work表示很努力
10与什么相似用the same as，不用with