Question

帮忙看一下我的英语作文！

请帮忙指出：错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议。
Everyone has their own fear, and I also have. I used to be afraid to go swimming, because when I was young, I used to fall over the pond, then I drank a belly of water, and then I was afraid to swim. But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help, I overcame the difficulties, sincethen, I am no longer afraid of swimming.
不是错误的语法重点句型。。。

Answer 1

But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help ， 改成things changed with the help of my friend.很硬写的东西，多背点英文文章吧

Answer 2

Everyone has his own fear, and I am not an exception. I used to be afraid of swimming because when I was young, I fell into the pond and drank a belly of water,sinc. then I was afraid of swimming. But last year,things changed with my friend's help, I overcame the fear and am no longer afraid of swimming.