Question

跪求英语作文，急用 以《My Vacation》为题 初二水平

假如你是林涛，去年夏天去北京度假，参观过许多地方。以My Vacation为题目，写一篇70词左右的短文。

内容包括：1.旅游景点（the Great Wall，the palace Museum，Tian`anmen Square，Beijing hutong）。
2.天气∕活动。
3.观点等。

Answer 1

My vacation was great.I went to Guilin with my family last week.We went there by train.
We stayed there for five days.We saw beautiful green hills,clear water and special caves.We went boating in Guilin.It was exciting.We had some delicious special food.The rice noodles were really good.
We had a wonderful vacation. I hope to go there again someday.

Answer 2

My Vacation
I am Ling Tao,last summer vacation I went to Beijing with my family.
we went there so fast by pline.It was so hot,but interesting.In first day,we went to the Great Wall and the Palace Museum,they are really beautiful and great.The next day,we went to the Tian`anmen Square,but it was rainny.I like the thirth day very mach,because we went to Beijing hutong,and eat something special----Beijing dark,and jiaozi.They are delicious.The fifth day , we went another interesting place.
All in all,it was a really tired but interesting vacation.I want to go there again!