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下面的短文有10个错误，我只找到7个，求英语大神帮找一找：Young people are often unhappy when they ...

下面的短文有10个错误，我只找到7个，求英语大神帮找一找：Young people are often unhappy when they are with their parent.They say their parents didn't understand them and think their parents are too strict with them.Parents often find that difficult to win their children's trust and they seem have forgotten how they themselves felt when theywere young.For an example，young people like to do things with much thinking.It's one of their ways to show that they have grown up but they can solve any difficult problem.Older people are easily to be worried，so they often plan things ahead and don't like their plans to be changing.So if you want them to allow you to do what they want，it's better to ask permission before you really start.

Answer 1

1. parent      改为 parents

2. didn't  改为 don't 

3. that  改为  it 

4. seem  改为 seem to 
   

5. for  an example 改为 for example

6. with  改为 without 

7. but  改为 that  

   
   

8. easily 改为 easy 

9. changing   改为 changed 

10. they  改为 you  
    

Answer 2

Young people are often unhappy when they are with their parent.They say their parents didn't (X-->don't)understand them and think their parents are too strict with them.Parents often find that (that-->it)difficult to win their children's trust and they seem (to)have forgotten how they themselves felt when theywere young.For (删an )example，young people like to do things with much thinking.It's one of their ways to show that they have grown up but(but-->and) they can solve any difficult problem(s).Older people are easily(easily-->easy) to be worried，so they often plan things ahead and don't like their plans to be changing(changing-->changed).So if you want them to allow (allow-->ask)you to do what they want，it's better to ask (for)permission before you really start.

1. didn't --> don't                  一般状态，不需要用过去时

2. that-->it                              find+it+....发现。。。怎么样，it代之后面的句子

3. seem和have中间加to        seem to do sth.

4. an删掉                               for example

5. but-->and                           此处表并列关系

6. problem加s                        problem是可数名词，any后面应加复数

7. easily-->easy                     be动词后面加形容词

8. changing-->changed          此处用被动形式，计划被改变

9. allow-->ask                         根据语义用allow不合适，应改为要求（ask)

10. ask和permission中间加for  ask for sth.要什么东西

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