Question

这是高中的英语题？下面的句子里有没有错误的地方请帮我改正过来。

Aysha went to a school in Kabul。 This school was known for it's poor education。It was very easy for her to drop out school。 She might have been exactly like that whether nothing had happened。At the beginning of the se从grade，her aunt bought her a book calling Harry Potter。
是At the beginning of the second grade。

Answer 1

Aysha went to a school in Kabul。 This school was known for it's (its) poor education。It was very easy for her to drop out (of )school。 She might have been exactly like that whether nothing had happened。At the beginning of the second grade (grade two)，her aunt bought her a book calling (called)  Harry Potter。

 

错误的地方已经改成了正确的，我用括号把正确的给括起来了，详细见下：

 

1. it's 改成 its      这里要用主格

2. drop out 改成 drop out of   固定短语，如果不加of, 则后面不能加宾语。

3. the second grade 改成 grade two

4. calling 改成 called   calling 是主动语态，这里应该用called，表示被动，这个书名是人起的，是被起，所以是被动。

Answer 2

标点符号有错误。不能用中文的句话。for its 不是it's drop out of school 而不是drop out school
grade two 不是second grade 还有 a book called 不是calling

Answer 3

　　共五句话:

　　第二句:it's应该为its ,应为物主代词,而不是it is
　　第三句:drop out应为drop out of 退学
　　第四句:whether去掉, 她本可以像什么都没发生过,虚拟语气
　　第五句:calling应该为called

Answer 4

1. it‘s变成its

2. drop out of school。

3. calling变成called。

Answer 5

book called HP