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Acoupleofmonthago,IwenttoQingdaowithmyparents.IlearnedthatitliedintheeasternpartofSha... A couple of month ago,I went to Qingdao with my parents.I learned that it lied in the eastern part of Shandong Province.It is far away from the city in what we live,so when we got there it was getting dark.When we got off the bus,the wind was so much heavy that we all felt very cold.Then we took a taxi to the hotel we have ordered. The next morning,they had some seafood for breakfast,which tasted deliciously.Then we went for walk in a park,see a few kites flying high in the sky.We spent a few days there.Once we were tired,we felt very happy.
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A couple of month(1、months,复数) ago, I went to Qingdao with my parents. I learned that it lied(2、lies,现在时态) in the eastern part of Shandong Province. It is far away from the city in what(3、which,定语从句引导词) we live, so when we got there it was getting dark. When we got off the bus, the wind was so much(4、去掉much,多余) heavy that we all felt very cold. Then we took a taxi to the hotel we have(5、had,过枣好去完成时态) ordered. The next morning, they(6、we,我们) had some seafood for breakfast, which tasted deliciously(7、delicious,形容词). Then we went for (8、加上a,去散步,习惯说法念渣)仔岩悄walk in a park, see(9、seeing,见到) a few kites flying high in the sky. We spent a few days there. Once(10、Though,虽然) we were tired, we felt very happy.
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第一排:month后加s,lied改为lies
第二排:in what的what改为唯谨which
第三排:誉瞎去掉so much里的much
第四庆山空排:have ordered里的have改为had,they had改为we had
第五排:deliciously改为delicious , walk前面加个a ,see改为seeing
最后一排: Once改为Although
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A couple of month (months) ago,I went to Qingdao with my parents.I learned that it lied (lies)如老 in the eastern part of Shandong Province.It is far away from the city in what (which) we live,so when we got there it was getting dark.When we got off the bus,the wind was so much (去掉much) heavy that we all felt very cold.Then we took a taxi to the hotel we have (had) ordered. The next morning,they had some seafood (帆租seafoods)for breakfast,which tasted deliciously(态橡兆delicious).Then we went for (a)walk in a park,see (seeing)a few kites flying high in the sky.We spent a few days there.Once (Although) we were tired,we felt very happy.
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A couple of
【months】ago ,I went to Qingdao with my parents .I know it is
【situated】 in the eastern part of shangdong Province of China .It is far away from the city
【where】 we live. when we got there ,it was already at night .when we got off the bus , the wind blew so hard that we fel so cold .we took a taxi to go back to our hotel . The next morning, they had some seafood for breakfast which tasted so delicious , we were walking delectably when we saw a kite flying in the sky , we spent a few days to stay there , tried as we felt , we felt so happy
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A couple of 【months】 ago,I went to Qingdao with my parents.I learned that it 【lied-lies】 in the eastern part of Shandong Province.It 【is-was】碧磨 far away from the city in 【拿碰what-which】 we 【live-lived】,so when we got there it was getting dark.When we got off the bus,the wind was so 【去掉消慧谈much】 heavy that we all felt very cold.Then we took a taxi to the hotel we 【have-had】 ordered. The next morning,they had some seafood for breakfast,which tasted 【deliciously-delicious】.Then we went for 【加a】walk in a park,【see-saw】 a few kites flying high in the sky.We spent a few days there.Once we were tired,we felt very happy.
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