Question

英语作文 写网络购物的利与弊

Advantages(利）:Cheaper、Save time Disadvantages(弊）：Konw about zhe information of the things only bu seeing on zhe Internet、Not conveniet to change zhe things 词数80词左右

Answer 1

Online shopping become young customers favorite nowadays. Online shopping platform such as Taobao, Ebay develop rapidly. However, several problems have appeared through the developing process.
The price of products is usually much cheaper than traditional shopping because producer can sell their products directly to customers without court rent or pay for shop assistents. Customers can also save much time by clicking the mouse and writing for their goods at home. While customers can merely obtain information by reading and watching photographs online, so risks for cheating or misleading do exist, and when these negative issues happens, it is not conveniet to change the things.
It is apparent that online-shopping have many advantages ,while customers should also pay attention on dishonest advertisements and announcements.
同学你好，大概帮你写了写，有小错误的话自己改一下哦。

追问

确定自己写的昂？为什么我书上写的shop online才是购物

追答

亲手写的，如假包换。
shop online是动词短语，我想用网购当主语就online shopping了呗。
其实也可以说 shopping online，都是正确的用法。

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感觉这不只80词了 英文看不懂 求修改

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有哪些词看不懂的，能指出来吗？
同学你上初中还是高中，我可以把词汇改改。
有120词了，我帮你改短点。

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我才初二- -

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不好意思啊，按照接近高中的水平写的，有的词太难了。
你着急要吗，不着急的话等我论文写完帮你认真看看。
算了，先帮你改好

Online shopping becomes young customers’ favorite nowadays.
Online shopping platform such as Taobao, eBay develop very quickly. However,
some problems have also come out.

The price is usually
cheaper than traditional shopping because the producer can sell their products
directly without rent or payment. Customers save much time because they needn’t
go to shops. Customers only receive information by reading and watching
photographs online. When you buy something you don’t like, it is not convenient
to change the things.

It is clear that online-shopping has many advantages, while
customers should also pay attention on dishonest advertisements and
announcements.
看还有没有不明白的东西，字数压缩了。

Answer 2

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages if internet shopping these days. some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on the line are open for 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if you like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

Answer 3

We talked about the advantages and disvantages if internet shopping these days. some stidetns think it's very convient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on the line are open for 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if you like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.

*However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

Answer 4

Convenience
The main reason for the popularity of online shopping is the convenience it provides. A September 2013 study by the Deloitte accountancy firm showed that 47 percent of those polled intended to use the Internet rather than or in addition to brick-and-mortar stores for their holiday shopping. Respondents to the study reported the ability to shop at any time and anywhere as the biggest selling points of online shopping. Another reported attraction of online shopping is the ability to research products and compare prices without physically visiting numerous stores. This allows you to save time and gas money.

Selection
The Internet's many online stores provide you with a vast array of potential purchases. Whereas a brick-and-mortar store may only provide a few options, an online counterpart may offer additional choices of color and design. For example, retail giants Wal-Mart and Target offer additional items that you can only purchase from their website. In addition, you may find a variety of homemade items online that would be unavailable otherwise. For example, the online marketplace Etsy provides a way for you to buy handcrafted goods from around the world.
Price
Savvy shoppers often search for the best price before making a purchase. You may be able to save money by purchasing your item from an auction site, a liquidator, or an out-of-state retailer that is offering the item for less. In addition, many sites don’t charge sales tax on out-of-state sales, although this may change eventually. When making an online purchase, make sure to include any shipping fees when figuring out the best price.

Security
One of the biggest concerns surrounding online shopping is the safety of your personal and financial information. In the spring of 2014, hackers successfully gained access to the customer database of auction giant eBay. The database contained personal information, including client names, birthdays, physical addresses, phone numbers, email addresses and encrypted passwords. The theft of this information left customers at risk for phishing schemes, which has the potential to lead to identity theft. In another example, hackers breached the customer databases for Target in 2013. This breach led to the exposure of customer information, including credit and debit card numbers, expiration dates and PIN numbers. Although all retailers carry some risk of a potential security breach, using a reputable retailer that has a secure site may reduce your risk. In addition, pay close attention to any reported breaches and closely monitor the account(s) you use when making an online purchase. Using PayPal, which operates as an intermediary between you and the retailer, may reduce the likelihood of the theft of your financial information. Avoid using public computers or insecure network connections when making online purchases, as doing so may increase your risk.

Accuracy
Because you cannot actually see and touch the item before you buy, what you see online may not be precisely what you get. Occasionally, the item that arrives in the mail falls short of the expectations you had when you made your online purchase. The color may differ from what you saw on the screen or the item may be of a lesser quality than you expected. Use a reputable retailer to reduce the chance of disappointment. In addition, choose a retailer with a return policy that meets your needs in the event you are not satisfied with your purchase.

Advantages:

on-line shopping can save you money in comparison to off-line shopping.
we don't need to leave the house to shop, it's easy doable from your PC.

We have access to a vast number of suppliers compared to other methods
Product information can often be more detailed and easier to access
You don't have to carry the bags

Disadvantages:

there is no way to check if what you buy is exactly what you want.
there is no way to check if what you buy is of decent quality.
Suppliers cannot be judged in the same way they can in a real store.
Unscrupulous traders are able to hide behind good looking web sites
It wont come until a few days later

Tips:

if you are new to on-line shopping, try some publicly known shopping sites, e.g. Amazon, to get yourself acquainted to on-line shopping.

Investigate on line traders - see if there are reviews by other customers.
Ensure that you have a physical address and company name before spending