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If I can go to the ancient times
If I can go to the ancient times ,I think that will be very interesting .
For example .I can change a war or prevent a war.Or ,I can establish a dynasty to withstand faudal etiquette.Because I can’t stand those tragedy like “Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai”I think I can stop the war of world. If I do that, I’ll make a big contribution of humanity.
If I can go to the ancient times……
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If I can go to the ancient times
If I can go to the ancient times ,I think it will be very interesting .
For example .I can change the reasult of a war or even prevent a war .Or ,I can establish a dynasty to withstand faudal etiquette.Because I can’t stand those tragedy like “Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai”I think I can stop the world war . If I do that, I’ll make a big contribution to humanity.
If I can go to the ancient times……