Question

求翻译英语主持稿

http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid=2030570862&uk=268626101
手机没法传图片，以上是图片地址，在今晚前搞定，高分
Google翻译的就算了。

Answer 1

Ladys and Gentlemen
Boys & girls, to all
Good evening!

S: Welcome to English Saloon Club to participate this Great Party.
W: Tonight is a distinguished day, for we, in autumn breeze, showering under autumn rain, come across each other in the brilliant Oct..
S: Tonight is a distinguished day, for we, bringing wishes, taking entrustments, make appointment in the English Saloon.
W: Tonight is to be remember, because your vigorous coutenances, with bright smiles, instill fresh blood in the English Saloon.
S: At this very moment, we are exhilarated .
W: At this very moment, thoughts are surging up.
S: Now, pray allow me say to you, in behalf of the English Saloon.
HE: Welcome to everybody! ('s arrivial?)

追问

自动翻译的好差。。。。

追答

看第一行就不像自动翻译的了
不过自动翻译确实差
可能有些错误，标出来了，看着改吧，迎新晚会出丑还是很影响社团形象的

Answer 2

Good Evening!

Distinguished guests,

Dear students ,

Welcome to our English salon Club to participate in our big party.

It's a special night for us to encounter each other in this unforgettable October with

the autumn wind blowing and light rain falling.

It's a special night for us to get togother in our English Salon family with the

sincerest blessing and commission.

It's a special night for our English Salon to get an infusiom of new life from all of

your young looks and brilliant smiles.

At this very moment,we fill with our fervor,

At this very moment,we fill with the surging emotions rushes.

And now, it's my pleasure to represent our club to give the best wishes to all of you:

Welcome to enjoy our English Salon Club!

with结构不知道有没有问题，求高手指导。谢谢。