下面的短文有10处错误,帮忙找一下:Good sleep is needed for good healthy.During sleep,the body ... 30
下面的短文有10处错误,帮忙找一下:Goodsleepisneededforgoodhealthy.Duringsleep,thebodyrepairsourselves...
下面的短文有10处错误,帮忙找一下:Good sleep is needed for good healthy.During sleep,the body repairs ourselves and is built up meanwhile.So to have a good sleep is very important. Here are some tips for getting agood night's sleep.First,make sure of your room is dark.Pull down the curtains.Let no lights of any kind in.Second,have hot bath just before bed.It males you realx but calm down.This starts the will to sleep.Last but not least,got some exercise during the daytime.this will have your body worked.You will find towars evening you have got tiring.Sleep then will come easily,谁会?
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1.第二句话 during sleep 应改为 during sleeping
2. first,make sure.... 改为 first, making sure
3. second, have hot ....改为 second, having
4. it males you relax but calm down males改为 makes
5. it males you relax but calm down but 改为 and
6. last but not least,got some... got改为getting
7. this will have your body... have 改为 help
8. this will have your body worked worked改为 working
9. you will find towars..... towars改为 towards
10. you will find towars evening you have got tiring. have改为will
2. first,make sure.... 改为 first, making sure
3. second, have hot ....改为 second, having
4. it males you relax but calm down males改为 makes
5. it males you relax but calm down but 改为 and
6. last but not least,got some... got改为getting
7. this will have your body... have 改为 help
8. this will have your body worked worked改为 working
9. you will find towars..... towars改为 towards
10. you will find towars evening you have got tiring. have改为will
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