Question

英语短文改错

When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher.She liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

Answer 1

When I first learned to write in English,I run(改为ran) into many difficulties.The main problem was in(去掉in) that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese（改为English）.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices（改为advice）.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk（改为talking） to myself on paper as I was learning to express me（改为myself） in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed（加上it） to my teacher.She liked it very（改为so） much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the(改为a) good one. I was great(改为greatly) encouraged by their words. 绝对没错的……

Answer 2

I run into many difficulties1.run改为ran，表示过去The main problem was in that I always ...2.去掉that前面的介词in，或者把that换成whichbut tried to translate everything into Chinese.3.把but换成andMy teacher advised me to keep diaries.4.keep后面加一动词Writing I followed her advices.5.advices去掉sSoon I began to enjoy talk to myself ...6.enjoy后加ing，所以talk要变成talkingas I was learning to express me in simple English.7.me换成myself比较好She liked it very much that she read it to the class.8.very换成soEveryone said the story was the good one.9.the换成aI was great encouraged by their words. 10.great变成greatly

Answer 3

第一行：run---ran , 把t“he main problem was in”中的in去掉第二行：but---and, 把第二个chinese改成Engish第三行：advices----advice, Happily----Luckily, enjoy talk----enjoy talking, 第四行：me---myself, 在showed后面加个it, 第五行：good---best, great--greatly

Answer 4

When I first learned to write in English,I run (run改ran) into many difficulties.The main problem was in (in去掉) that I always thought in Chinese but (but改and) tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices (advices改advice). Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk (talk改talking) to myself on paper as I was learning to express me (me改myself) in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed (showed后加一个it) to my teacher.She liked it very (very改so) much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good (good改best) one. I was great (great改greatly) encouraged by their words.