Question

英语句子改错

1 . There is no school on Saturday afternoon I’m going to the park.

2. When the guitar player and the drummer took their bows.
3. The day started out rainy ,by noon the sun came out.
4. Here is the summary .That you wanted me to write for you.

5. Coca-Cola was originally sold as a medicine .For use against headaches.

Answer 1

1. There is no class on Saturday afternoon. I'm going to the park.周六下午没课

2. The guitar player and the drummer took their bows. 吉他手和鼓手鞠了一躬。有when这句话就不是一句完整的话，只能是状语从句，后面不能加句号

3. The day started out raniny, until by noon the sun came out.两个单个的从句不能并列，必须有连词将两句话连在一起

4. Here is the summary that you wanted me to write for you.宾语从句，that必须和修饰词相连，不能断裂成两句

5.  Coca-Cola  was  originally  sold  as  a  medicine  for  use  against  headaches. 和上面一句一样，for在这里做连词表示因为，把两句话连在一起。

 

看了下，第三题和第五题同意楼上的回答。第二题保留

追问

鞠躬的短语是什么？

追答

take a bow

根据大家的回答，我整理下，各人都有对有错

1. There is no class on Saturday afteroon, so i am going to the park.

2. The guitar player and the drummer took their bows. 我还是坚持删掉when

3. The day started out raniny, but at noon the sun came out. by noon是直到中午为止的意思，时态要用完成时，但是这句话意思是，早上开始是阴天，中午太阳才出来，所以应该是个点时间，不是一段时间，介词用的有问题

4. Here is the summary that you wanted me to write for you.

5. Coca-Cola  was  originally  sold  as  a  medicine  for  using  against  headaches. 可能这个比较符合考试

Answer 2

1.两个句子并列中间加and；2.时态不对；3.说不出具体原因，但是感觉by noon是不能提前的（记不得用法了）；4.应该是定语从句用法错误，that用的不对；5.应该是for using，

Answer 3

1. there is no class on sat afteroon, so i am going to the park.

2. when the guiter was played, the drummer took his bows.

3. the day started raining, but the sun came out by noon.

4. here is the summary that you wanted me to write for you.

5. coca-cola was originally sold as a medicine against headaches.

Answer 4

1.   There is not school on Saterday afternoon . I am going to the park

2.   When  the  guitar  player  and  the  drummer  took  their   instruments

3.   The day started out rainy by noon the sun came out .

4.   Here is the summary which you wanted me to write for you.

5.   Coca-Cola was originally sold as a medicine for using against headaches