Question

请英语好的朋友帮忙看看下面的这段话怎么翻译成英语好，怎么说的客气婉转一些呢？请指教。

上次您寄给我的2台设备中，贵司忘记发电线了，这次寄给我的1台设备中有电线（没有忘记），这是开箱后我们同事拍的照片，能否请您在我们下次订货中多发2根电线给我们？

Answer 1

【原文】上次您寄给我的2台设备中，贵司忘记发电线了，这次寄给我的1台设备中有电线（没有忘记），这是开箱后我们同事拍的照片，能否请您在我们下次订货中多发2根电线给我们？

【译文】Hello xxx,

Thanks for enclosing cable for the last equipment we received from you. Enclosed is the photo we took after opening the package.

However, I think cable was missing for the earlier 2 equipments you sent to us. Would you mind send us 2 set of the cable when you make your next delivery to us? Thanks a lot.

Best Regards,
xxx

以上翻译，还望题主满意。如蒙满意，还望采纳。多谢了。

Answer 2

The 2 equipments you sent us last time were lack of cables. And this time we have the cable with this one equipment together. These are the pictures of the case my coworker took after we open it. In our next order, can you please send us 2 more cables?

Answer 3

There was no cables in the last two equipments you sent us, but this time there is(enclosed with photos we took after opening packages of equipments).
Could you kindly send us two cables you forgot to equipped with the equipments? Thanks very much.

Answer 4

This sent me a piece of equipment with wires (not forgotten), which is out of the box after photographs of our colleagues, can I ask you in our next order of multiple two wires to us?
Because the last time you sent me two devices, the power cord of your company to forget.