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Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about a mother who was worried about his son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, and the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinions on same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father fings me listen to rock music, he always shouted,"Shut it off.It is awful !" How can we deal the generation gap?

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about a mother who was worried about his son just because he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, and the son felt there was nothing unusual about it. Different generations have different opinions on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily life. Most of our parents like listening to old songs while young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listening to rock music, he always shouts,"Shut it off.It is awful !" How can we deal with the generation gap?