Question

英语改错！！！速度！！！

Answer 1

On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, in (加一个in，光有which指代不通，或者直接将which改成一个词where也是可以的) which we saw a great diversity of robots (复数，a great diversity是很多种类的意思，robot又可数). It was amazing (I am amazed; a thing is amazing. Amazed是使着迷的意思，而amazing是令人着迷的) to find that (加一个that更通顺) those robots could do a great number of things just like real people do (一般中学之类的都不强调，但其实加上do更通顺), including playing chess, playing the piano and drawing pictures. What's more, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which made it enjoyable to us (原句不通). In addition, what excited me the most (原句是错的用法，这个才是对的，另外most前面要加the) is the show given by a group of robots. They danced (个人认为just很没必要，弄的这句话很别扭)as if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot (不要of) about robots, especially about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is so powerful that it makes (第三人称单数) us more comfortable to live (或者living) in the world.

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Answer 2

第一行，which——where
第二行，robot——robots，amazed——amazing,could——can
第三行，included——including
第四行，enjoyable——joyful，that——what，most——the most
第六行，especial——especially
第七行，live——living