Question

英语短文改错，急用！

I visit my old school yesterday.It hasn't changed in 30 years.(1.)
The pupils were sitting by the same desks and read the same(2.)
books.When are schools going to move into the modern world?(3. )
Books are belong to the past.In our homes radio and television(4)
bring us Knowledge of the world.We can see and hear the true(5.)
for ourselves.If we want entertainment,most of us prefered a(6. )
modern film to a classical novel.In business world,Computers(7.)
store information,so as we no longer need encyclopaedias(8. )
and dictionary.There should be a radio and(9. )
television set in every classroom,and a library of(10. )
tapes an records in every school.

Answer 1

1visit改visited，yesterday表示要用过去式 hasn't 改hadn't吧

2 read 改reading，因为和The pupils were sitting 是并列的

3正确

4去掉are belong to本身就相当于及物动词，属于

5 true改truth，这里是名词

6prefered改prefer，if主句 want没有用过去式啊

7In 后加the In the business world在商务世界

8as改that，so that才能接后面从句，再者so as to词组也用错了，而且这里不能加to，用法不是这样的

9dictionary改dictionaries，可数名词，和encyclopaedias并列的

10and后加be，前面一个and表示连接radio和television的整体，这一个and是并列2句句子了

Answer 2

visit-visit
read-reading
are-\
\