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几个英语句子，求英语大神帮忙修改一下

求大神帮我修改一下下面5个句子，最好再添加一下，如果需要的话。谢谢啦 1. Don't forget to send me a postcard when you go to Japan. I wish us to keep in touch frequently after you leave; after all, I will miss you a lot if you go to another place. 2. We usually avoid trying to drive through the center of town during rush hour. Traffic jam always takes me a lot of time and driving too slowly could drive me crazy. 3. Bad weather forced us to stop playing tennis earlier today. We had to change our previous plans; we planed to go to MOA instead. 4. Jessica was disappointed not to see any of her friends at the shopping center. In fact, Jessica recalled a wrong time and she arrived at the shopping center one hour earlier. 5. Those huge buses aren't easy to drive along narrow winding roads. The transportation department in Minneapolis has noticed this problem and decides to change the bus route next month.

Answer 1

1. Don't forget to send me a post card when you get back to Japan. I really hope we can keep in touch frequently after you leave. After all, I will miss you a lot if you leave for another place. since the technology is so advanced today, we can always call or chat online.

2. We avoid driving accross downtown during rush hours. Traffic jam can take up to hours and driving too slowly drives me crazy. Sometime we I'm stuck in traffic, I just wish I'd take the subway in the first place.

3. Bad weather froced us to change our previous plan earlier today. We had to stop playing tennis because of the crazy wind. Neverthless, we decided to go to MOA instead. It turned out to be great. Guess we will just find another time for tennis.

4. Jessica was dissapointed not to see any of her friends at the shopping center. However, the truth is that she has forgotten the time schedule and arrived one hour earlier. Forturnely, she hasn't forgot her phone. She called her friends and waited in Starbucks until they all arrived.

5. The transportation department in Minneapolis has noticed that huge buses aren't easy to drive alone the narrow winding roads. They then decided to change the bus route next month for safty concerns. This decision was applaud by all the drivers.

每个句子都修改并添加了一些成分。纯手打，喜欢请采纳。 ^o^

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看到了你添加了一点，每句的第一句是给出来的，你居然都要改，后面添加的句子语法错误还挺多的，不过还是谢谢你了

Answer 2

1. Don't forget to send me a postcard when you go to Japan. I hope we can keep in touch frequently after you leave; after all, I will miss you a lot if you go to another place. 2. We usually manage not to drive through the center of town during rush hour. Traffic jam always takes me a lot of time and driving too slowly would drive me crazy. 3. Bad weather prevented us from playing tennis earlier today. We had to change our previous plans; we planed to go to MOA(moa是想表达什么意思) instead. 4. Jessica was disappointed not to see any of her friends at the shopping center. In fact, Jessica misremembered the time and she arrived at the shopping center one hour earlier. 5. Those huge buses are not easy to drive along on the narrow and winding roads. The transportation department in Minneapolis has noticed this problem and decided to change the bus route next month.

Answer 3

1. Don't forget to send me a post card when you get to Japan.

2. We avoid driving through the center of town during rush hour.Traffic jam takes me a lot of time and driving too slowly drives me crazy.

3. Bad weather prevented us to stop playing tennis earlier today.We had to change our previous plans;we planned to go to MOA instead.

4. Jessica was dissapointed not to see any of her friends at the shopping center. In fact,Jessica has forgotten the time schedule and arrived at the shopping center one hour earlier.

5. Those huge buses aren't easy to drive on narrow winding roads.The transportation department in Minneapolis has noticed this problem and decided to change the bus route next month.

                                               希望对你有所帮助！

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每个句子的第一句是题目给的，我要在后面加1-2句话