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I have been play piano for four years.Last year when I heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.Finally came that day.When we arrived at the concert hall, my hand started shaking expectedly.However,just looking at my teacher's warm face let him get back self-confidence.When it was my turn to perform, I go up the stage and played the piece from beginning to an end pleasantly. Soon, the cheers filled the concert hall. I felt very happy and very proud myself. That is my first piano performance,but I will never forget it for the rest of my life. 展开
I have been play piano for four years.Last year when I heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.Finally came that day.When we arrived at the concert hall, my hand started shaking expectedly.However,just looking at my teacher's warm face let him get back self-confidence.When it was my turn to perform, I go up the stage and played the piece from beginning to an end pleasantly. Soon, the cheers filled the concert hall. I felt very happy and very proud myself. That is my first piano performance,but I will never forget it for the rest of my life. 展开
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I have been (play改成playing) (加入the) piano for four years. Last year when I heard the news (which改成that) there was going to be a piano performance (came改成coming) up in a few weeks, I felt very nervous. Finally came that day. When we arrived at the concert hall, my (hand改成hands) started shaking (expectedly改成unexpectedly). However, just looking at my teacher's warm face let (him改成me) get back self-confidence. When it was my turn to perform, I (go改成went) up the stage and played the piece from beginning to (去掉an) end pleasantly. Soon, the cheers filled the concert hall. I felt very happy and very proud (加入of) myself. That is my first piano performance, (but改成and) I will never forget it for the rest of my life.
总共找到了十一处错误，应该是楼主打字有误。
I have been (play改成playing) (加入the) piano for four years. Last year when I heard the news (which改成that) there was going to be a piano performance (came改成coming) up in a few weeks, I felt very nervous. Finally came that day. When we arrived at the concert hall, my (hand改成hands) started shaking (expectedly改成unexpectedly). However, just looking at my teacher's warm face let (him改成me) get back self-confidence. When it was my turn to perform, I (go改成went) up the stage and played the piece from beginning to (去掉an) end pleasantly. Soon, the cheers filled the concert hall. I felt very happy and very proud (加入of) myself. That is my first piano performance, (but改成and) I will never forget it for the rest of my life.
总共找到了十一处错误，应该是楼主打字有误。
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