Question

谁能帮我写一篇英语作文，是用过去式的，是旅行的作文，70个单词左右啊！

一定是要用过去式的啊 旅行的

Answer 1

Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner.
The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.The good expression was the informce of the dophin,They could save people,also could show many things.They are very smart!
I like HongKong very much !

中文去年暑假，我们一家人去了香港。一早，爸爸先开车到深圳，我们吃完中饭之后，就坐地铁到香港了。香港是个金融中心，到处人山人海，我们只是逛了一下，就去吃晚餐了。
第二天，我们去了海洋公园，那里可好玩啦！最让人印象深刻的是海豚表演。它们会救人，会表演特技，真聪明。
我喜欢香港。

Answer 2

【范文】

Travel

Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures, meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much, you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences, but also be aware of the vastness of nature.

Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience, which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later, you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences, thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.

The field’s his study, nature was his book.

Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive, but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle, which, although slow, can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

【评语】

本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因，接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情，最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明，主题突出。“come into contact with…”，“enrich you knowledge and experiences”，“be aware of the vastness of nature”，“disperse your boredom”，“broaden your mind”等词语的恰当搭配，生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。