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IvisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthelistylastweekIwassurprisedtoseethatgreatohamgesh...
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the listy last weekI was surprised to see that great ohamges had been taken place in the cauntryside(1 )take my anut's family for example we supply precious (2 )trees and flowers to the stores in the city and(3 )have over ten workers working for them selves(4 )their family's in come reached as mnch 100.000(5 )yuan last year not only did they have(6 )a house a car and computers they can also afford a trip a broad every year asking what esse they needed most(7 )they said that wanted to learm afew(8 )english so that they could do business with foreigners direetly to their delig hted(9 )my cousin can use that he has learned from unirersity to heip them with overseas trade(10 )
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1. had been taken place改为 had taken place
2. we改成they
3. in the city改为in cities
4. themselves改为them
5. as much 100,000 改为as much as 100,000
6. did they have 改为 do they have
7. asking改为when asked
8. a few改为a little
9. delighted改为delight
10. that he has learned改为what he has learned
2. we改成they
3. in the city改为in cities
4. themselves改为them
5. as much 100,000 改为as much as 100,000
6. did they have 改为 do they have
7. asking改为when asked
8. a few改为a little
9. delighted改为delight
10. that he has learned改为what he has learned
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