Question

求助英语高手批改高三英语作文。

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I want to tell you something about the relationship with my dad. needless to say, there no parent who does not love their kids. My dad gives love but also hurt to me. No one likes to be毫不客气地批评unreservedly criticism all the time . that would affect one’s proper 评价estimate of his abilities .One day we had a 口角spat .i can’t help telling him how sad I am when I listen to his words. However, it seems help little. I told my mom how I feel, and she just told me that what I could do is to receive him because he was my dad and it was hard to change his personality and change the way he speaks. Well, I felt upset and nobody understood me those days. One day, I spoke to him in the way as he did to me. then you can’t imagine how angry he was . to be honest, I was happy then, finally he knew the feeling to be hurt. Then Our cold war started, it has not stopped until today. I don’t know how I feel now. on the one hand, I can’t forgive him for what he said to me in the past. on the other hand, I knew my dad is not a 教育家educator or心理学家psychologist ,how can he know what effect of his words. May be he wanted me to get rid of my bad habbits but didn’t pay attention to the way he said or 对方的实际情况the adversary of the adversary. In terms of that, I should forgive him, but it seems that he has been totally frustrated about me . oh, ,it is good that nobody have faith in me . just kidding , maybe hurt can fade away as time goes by.

Answer 1

there no parent who does not love their kids should be there are no parents who do not love their kids.起码应该是这样。这真的是高三的英语作文吗，那可没救了。

Answer 2

这是我初一的水平，或者说是翻译机的水平。悬赏分还为0。

Answer 3

这是我初中水平
我今年高一 标点用错 语法问题一堆 么心情改了