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My children's day为题（英语作文）

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l had a good children's day yesterday. first i went to the amuseument park with my parents.it is so exciting.then we went to a zoo.there are many different animals.but my favorite animals are pandas.because they are cute and clever,finlly went home,we are tired but happy!i will not forget this experience!

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好评！全手打，很累啊

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该大写你不大写

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倒数f第二句are改成were

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倒数第二句are改成were

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l had a good children's day yesterday. first i went to the amuseument park with my parents.it was so exciting.then we went to a zoo.there are many different animals.but my favorite animals are pandas.because Ithey are cute and clever,finlly went home,we wr tired but happy!i were will not forget this experience!