哪位高手帮我写一篇英语作文啊
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.youshouldstartyouressaywithabrie...
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with a brief description of the sentence: Parents said to their child: " Your mother and i thought you understand, Billy, that our love for you was highly conditional on your doing well in school."
and express your views on test scores. overemphasize the test score.
you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 展开
and express your views on test scores. overemphasize the test score.
you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words 展开
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Today, students are getting more and more pressure from school and ambitious parents. School becomes not only a place of education, but also a place of competition. Parents demand high grades from their children because that will make them proud. Lots of parents give rewards for children who do well in school. For example, buy them a new phone if they get 100 on final exam. Although the reward/punishment method does motivates people, this is not a healthy way of educating. For one of the reasons, high test score does not always mean high understanding of knowledge, what can be put on a test is limited. It's not fair to judge if someone has studied hard basing on their test score. Moreover, parents' love for their children is never built on things like performance in school. By saying that, it's a lie that will burn.
Today, students are getting more and more pressure from school and ambitious parents. School becomes not only a place of education, but also a place of competition. Parents demand high grades from their children because that will make them proud. Lots of parents give rewards for children who do well in school. For example, buy them a new phone if they get 100 on final exam. Although the reward/punishment method does motivates people, this is not a healthy way of educating. For one of the reasons, high test score does not always mean high understanding of knowledge, what can be put on a test is limited. It's not fair to judge if someone has studied hard basing on their test score. Moreover, parents' love for their children is never built on things like performance in school. By saying that, it's a lie that will burn.
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