Question

With the coming of national day, I have a one week holiday. I really expect to it, because it wa

With the coming of national day, I have a one week holiday. I really expect to it, because it want to have a short trip during these days. I will travel to Jiuzhai Valley with my parents for three days.
　　I have heard that the scenery of Jiuzhai Valley is very beautiful in autumn that it’s the best time to travel there. Autumn is my most favorite season so I want to enjoy the beauty of such a wonderful place. I do some preparations for this trip.

Answer 1

随着国庆节的到来，我即将有一周的假期。我很期盼它的到来，因为我想用这几天去做一个短途旅行。我会和我父母去九寨沟玩儿三天。
我听说九寨沟景区在秋天特别美，所以这是去那里的最好季节。秋天是我最喜欢的季节所以我想要在那个美丽的地方享受美景。我真的为这次旅行做足了准备。

Answer 2

稍作修改：
With the coming of national day, I will have a one-week holiday. I really look forward to it because I want to have a trip during these days. I will travel to Jiuzhai Valley with my parents for three days.
　　I have heard that the scenery of Jiuzhai Valley is very beautiful .And autumn is the best time to visit there. Autumn is also my favorite season , so I want to enjoy the beauty of such a wonderful place there. I can't wait to do some preparations for the trip now.