Question

英语高手帮个忙，谢了！！！

How is everything going recently?
I heard that you have just become a new mother. It is said that the birth of the new life is the present from the love of god. congratulations for you !
On this special day, I want to tell you that with all my heart I wish you and your family the best of all. Happy every day!

这段话里有病句吗？如果有的话请帮我改一下，谢谢！

Answer 1

有 对的我就不写了 下面我给你写改正的句子

heard that you have just became a new mother

god 改为 God 上帝要大写的

the best of all----- of all 去掉

every day 改为 everyday

Answer 2

翻译得太中国化，，，
第一句直接说HOW ARE YOU RECENTLY
HAVE后面是完成时额~
LOVE OF GOD。。。直接说APHRODITE
BECOME A NEW MOTHER明显说不通
BEST WISH FOR YOU AND YOUR FAMILY

Answer 3

congratulations to you
everyday
god如果不是特别强调，不用大写。
楼上几位，become过去分词形式是become好不好。

Answer 4

heard that you have just became a new mother中：

god 改为 God

the best of all：

of all 去掉

every day 改为 everyday

Answer 5

How is everything going recently?
I heard that you have just become a new mother. It is said that the birth of the new life is the present from the love of god. congratulations for you !
On this special day,I wish you and your family the best of all. bE Happy every day!