写上海的英语作文
作文：
Shanghai is part of the alluvial plain of the Yangtze River Delta, with an average height of about 2.19 meters above sea level. The highest elevation is Dajinshan Island, located in Hangzhou Bay, Jinshan District, with an elevation of 103.70 meters.
上海是长江三角洲冲积平原的一部分，平均高度为海拔2.19米左右。海拔最高点是位于金山区杭州湾的大金山岛，海拔为103.70米。
In the west, Tianma Mountain, Xueshan Mountain, Fenghuang Mountain and other remnant hills, Tianma Mountain is the highest point on land in Shanghai, with an elevation of 99.8 meters and a stone tablet "Sheshan Peak".
西部有天马山、薛山、凤凰山等残丘，天马山为上海陆上最高点，海拔高度99.8米，立有石碑“佘山之巅”。
Shanghai is China's financial centre, and it covers almost all the elements of China's financial market.
上海是中国金融中心，上海几乎囊括了全中国所有的金融市场要素。
技巧：
1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用 however, and 等连词外,遇到并列的事情时,要用“in the first place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则 不得分!用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。
2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语:Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如:Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies.
(英国人都恨不得把所有的信息在一句话里说完。不象中国人,细言慢语,层层展开。所以翻译时,一句英语可以翻成四句汉语。) 特别是在文章开头第一段,如果用上定语从句或状语等,就拿高分了。
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是个漂亮的城市there
are
many
tall
buildings
in
shanghai
and
the
air
in
shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高楼大厦，鸟语花香
shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是国际化城市很多来自世界各地的人都来上海做生意shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好
is
located
in
east
of
China,
next
to
Jiangsu
Province.
Shanghai
is
very
famous
in
China
and
even
all
over
the
world.
It
is
the
biggest
city
in
China.
And
it
is
the
commercial
center
of
China,
too.
People
from
south
and
north
come
to
here
for
trip
and
shopping.
I
like
Shanghai
very
much.
I
like
the
high
buildings
and
the
convenient
transport.
上海位于中国东部，毗邻江苏省。上海在中国甚至世界范围内都有很高的知名度。它是中国最大的城市，也是中国的商业中心。全国各地的人都来这里购物观光。
我很喜欢上海，喜欢这里的高楼大厦，还有它便捷的交通。
