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One night, I went to a store to buy the shirt. The shop assistant showed me several shirts to choose. I had no idea what one would suit me. At last, I made up my mind to buy an expensive shirt, thinking that it might go well with my new trouser. On my way to home, I was very excited. However, before I got up the next day, trying on the shirt and looked at it this way and that, my excitement was gone. I found that was not so nice at home as it is in the store. Knowing that I couldn’t possible change it, I thought I had better put it away and use it in the future.

Answer 1

I had no idea what one would suit me. -> which one

thinking that it might go well with my new trouser. -> trousers，两个裤管，要用复数

On my way to home -> 去掉to，on my way home, home是副词，直接用

looked at it this way and that -> 没有this way and that这个词组，这半句可以不要

I found that was not so nice at home as it is in the store. -> that 最好换成the shirt，否则容易理解为宾语从句的引导词。后面的is 应该是was

Knowing that I couldn’t possible change it -> possibly 动词前面加副词

Answer 2

One night, I went to a store to buy the 【the 改为 a】shirt. The shop assistant showed me several shirts to choose. I had no idea what 【what 改为 which】one would suit me. At last, I made up my mind to buy an expensive shirt 【改为one】, thinking that it might go well with my new trouser. On my way to【去掉 to】home, I was very excited. However, before 【改为after】 I got up the next day, trying 【改为tried】on the shirt and looked at it this way and that, my excitement was gone. I found that 【加入 it】 was not so nice at home as it is 【改为 was】 in the store. Knowing that I couldn’t possible 【加入 to】change it, I thought I had better put it away and use it in the future.

Answer 3

1 approach改为approaching
2 so改为too
3 mentally改为mental
4 phenomena改为phenomenon
5 is改为are
6（删去a） plenty of
7 take改为taking
8 yourselves改为yourself
9 follow改为following
10 but改为and

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