Question

假设你将代表你校2013届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内要点如下表所示

假设你将代表你校2013届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内要点如下表所示。 回顾 在美丽的学校学习了三年; 将会永远记住它老师们总是尽力把课上得生动有趣课余生活丰富多彩; 参加这些活动很有乐趣学到了很多知识; 也取得了很大的进步 感谢 老师和父母的支持和帮助 祝愿 …… 注意：发言稿须包括所有的要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；表格中”祝愿”一栏，请用自己的2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；词数80个左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates.It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇发言稿，首先是回顾过去，所以本部分应该用过去时；然后是感谢应该用现在时，最后是祝愿，可以用将来时。由于本发言稿是代表同学们做的，故人称应该用we，不要用I。应注意连词和固定短语的用法，注意书写时应该包括所以内容。 点评：本题的难点在于确定文章的时态及人称，很多同学会用第一人称进行书写。其次，对于提纲作文，书写时一定要有层次性。