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Accordingtothepassage,weknowthatindia’sPrimeMinisterNarendraModiwouldliketostartaU.N....
According to the passage, we know that india’s Prime Minister Narendra Modi would like to start a U.N. International Yoga Day. Many doctors and people said that yoga is beneficial to our health. However. It has some disadvantage which be able to suffer some physical injury while practicing yoga
At present. Yoga is increasingly popular in China. No matter men and women. The old and young.
What yoga has many benefits is that it can make you healthy in your physically and mentally. Meanwhile. It can help you improve the attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
From my point of view. I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can help me relax myself when I am under pressure
To sum up. If you have the opportunity.You can go to try it
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At present. Yoga is increasingly popular in China. No matter men and women. The old and young.
What yoga has many benefits is that it can make you healthy in your physically and mentally. Meanwhile. It can help you improve the attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
From my point of view. I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can help me relax myself when I am under pressure
To sum up. If you have the opportunity.You can go to try it
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1. However. It has some disadvantage which be able to suffer some physical injury while practicing yoga
--- However,it has some disadvantages also that it may cause some physical injury while practicing yoga.
however 逗号，小写 / some disadvantages 复数 / which be...用定语重句，先行词是disadvantage 那后续应该是对disadvantage修饰，而你句中显然是对disadvantage的解释说明。改成了that 引导的同位语重句。/ cause 伤害是造成的， 主语是生命体或拟人时用suffer
2. At present. Yoga is increasingly popular in China.No matter men and women. The old and young.
--- At present, Yoga is becoming popular in China.
become popular 开始流行/ 后面的男女老少 不知道你要表达什么
3. What yoga has many benefits is that it can make you healthy in your physically and mentally. Meanwhile. It can help you improve the attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
--- What yoga can benefit you is it can help you to make healthy in both physical and mental sides.Meanwhile，it can improve your attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
what 引导主语重句 动词 主语这么搭配/ 副词和形容词搭配
4. From my point of view. I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can help me relax myself when I am under pressure
---From my point of view,I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can relax myself when I am under pressure.
help me relax myself 帮我放松自己 太中文逻辑了
5. To sum up. If you have the opportunity.You can go to try it
To sum up, if you have the opportunity, you can go and try it.
go to... 某个地方 两个动词 and 连接
--- However,it has some disadvantages also that it may cause some physical injury while practicing yoga.
however 逗号，小写 / some disadvantages 复数 / which be...用定语重句，先行词是disadvantage 那后续应该是对disadvantage修饰，而你句中显然是对disadvantage的解释说明。改成了that 引导的同位语重句。/ cause 伤害是造成的， 主语是生命体或拟人时用suffer
2. At present. Yoga is increasingly popular in China.No matter men and women. The old and young.
--- At present, Yoga is becoming popular in China.
become popular 开始流行/ 后面的男女老少 不知道你要表达什么
3. What yoga has many benefits is that it can make you healthy in your physically and mentally. Meanwhile. It can help you improve the attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
--- What yoga can benefit you is it can help you to make healthy in both physical and mental sides.Meanwhile，it can improve your attention and relax yourself by breathing and meditating.
what 引导主语重句 动词 主语这么搭配/ 副词和形容词搭配
4. From my point of view. I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can help me relax myself when I am under pressure
---From my point of view,I am willing to practice yoga.Because yoga can relax myself when I am under pressure.
help me relax myself 帮我放松自己 太中文逻辑了
5. To sum up. If you have the opportunity.You can go to try it
To sum up, if you have the opportunity, you can go and try it.
go to... 某个地方 两个动词 and 连接
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