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My beautiful hometown
My hometown is in Guantao county, Handan city Hebei domain. It lies in the east of Hebei domain. Although it is a small town the people there are very friendly.
Good, honest. This is a beautiful place with mild spring fascinating summer, rainy autumn and snowy winter, cold fruits thriving; cold, snow;
There are some unique features in my hometown such as the famous pottery ,besides the cucumber town is a good place to visit.
In the beautiful coastal park opposite Guantao County, there is a beautiful legend, and the scenery is very beautiful place, this is the Guantao Princess lake. Guantao Princess lake, as its name suggests, is related to the princess of Guantao. It is said that in history, in addition to the three emperors of the prince, named Guantao, there are four emperors of the daughter, also known as the princess of Guantao. The most famous is the Han Emperor and empress Dou's daughter Liu Piao, because of her fief land in Guantao county is called the princess of Guantao. The three princess also are the Han Emperor's daughter Liu Shi, daughter of the Han Dynasty emperor Liu Hongyun and Han Dynasty Emperor's daughter Liu Hongyun and Tang Gaozu's seventeenth daughters. Here a princess legend also allows people to fall into a reverie.
Welcome to visit my hometown.

Answer 1

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.