Question

哪位英语好的愿意帮忙检查一下语法有什么错误还有可以做哪些改进，因为还没写完。

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Answer 1

建议更改：

第二张蓝色字的，前几句中错误较多，按照你的原意需要改成：

To my perspective, I think the best way to improve my writing is to spend more time on writing, revising, and trying again.（这句话其实逻辑不是很通）

In addition/Besides/Moreover/Further/Further more, reading is also a good way to improve my wirtting. Reading more books with different topic can enlarge my vocabulary and create more ideas. 

最后一句话没有问题。

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太谢谢了

黑色字的呢