Question

急求一道英语改错题 ， 谢谢

Answer 1

供参考
删去括弧内字
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I
like
watching
birds.
I
chose
(choose)
this
hobby
(bobby)
years
(yesrs)
ago
because
I
like
birds
and
enjoy
being
close
to
the
nature。
改后的时态控制也不好，但还是可以接受
Bird
watching
is
a
good
hobby
and
(so)
it
is
not
very
expensive.
这里没有用so并不适当
As
a
beginner
,
all
you
need
is
curiosity
and
a
notebook
。(，)
When
(when)
you
become
curious
about
it
,
you
may
want
to
buy
(bbuy)
more
books
about
birds
and
a
better
telescope,
with
no
need
of
special
skills
(not
special
skills
are
needed).
And
(but)
it
helps
if
you
(i)
join
a
bird
watching
club(.)
You
(they)
can
learn
(teach)
from
it
when
and
where
to
watch
birds
and
what
to
watch
about
(watch)
them.
(1)
原文不要一时用
I
，之后又用you
(2)
they这个代名词来指club不太好
所以用了you
can
learn
from
it
it
指club
You
(you)
will
also
be
taught
about
geography
and
the
weather.
If
(if)
you
want
to
become
a
bird
watcher
,
I
strongly
(strong)
suggest
you
try
to
find
a
bird
watching
club,
and
it
(they)
will
help
you
get
started
(start).
Good
(good)
luck.
一点意见
减少标点符号的错误
原文的错处便会少了许多