Question

英语语法问题求指点，请分析下面这句话，that后使用hearing是否可行，语法上属于什么结构？

it is a delightful surprise for me that hearing you will come to my city .

Answer 1

that hearing you will come to my city这个结构是错误的。
1 要么去掉that, 直接用动词-ing短语作真正主语，即：
It is a delightful surprise for me hearing you will come to my city .

= Hearing you will come to my city is a delightful surprise for me。
2 要么把that主语 从句的主谓构成完整：
It is a delightful surprise for me that I hear you will come to my city .
=That I hear you will come to my city is a delightful surprise for me.
3 还可以用下列结构表达：
It is a delightful surprise for me to hear you will come to my city 。
动词不定式作真正主语。

Answer 2

It's a delightful surprise for me that you will come to my
city.

Answer 3

题主只要注意到you will come to my city整体是hearing的宾语从句，就知道如果如句子里那样用了that，那that后面引导的就是一个不完整的从句。
最简单的纠正办法是把that去掉、把hearing改成不定式to hear，即：It's a delightful surprise for me to hear ( that) you will come to my city.