Question

Could you give me some help,please?Thank you very much !And is there any grammar mistakes?

I'm a sophomore in Zhanjiang No. 4 middle school

The total score of English single subject test is 150 points

In each college entrance examination English simulation test

I always score more than 60

Poor grades, what should I do?

How do you do to improve my score to about 140 points

The college entrance examination will be held soon

Can I still improve my grades?

Answer 1

What should i do to improve my score to about 140？

Answer 2

第二句:total score是一个单数形式，但是后面又用了points复数形式，可以直接把points删掉。要么前面改成total scores,然后后面谓语改成are.
第三句:score不能用作动词，可以改成I was always just marked over 60.
第四句:改成How can you do to improve my score up to 140 points?
第五局:把so on去掉，改成will still be held.
最后，语言的学习都是持之以恒的过程，妙语短篇是比较好的选择。

Answer 3

第一和第二句没有语法错误。第三句不能用Is there…………？要改为Are there……………？因为后面的mistakes是可数名词的复数形式。

Answer 4

It's Chinglish. We usually say "Could you do me favor ?" in English.