Question

急求高人翻译（汉译英），在线等！！采用另有加分！

时间太快，我赶不上你
彼岸太远/世界太大，我触不着你
但当你或轻柔或激情地演唱
我感到你近在咫尺/触手可及
当你激情地舞动旋转
你是如此清晰明了

（两个“激情”，中文找不到合适的词，但希望翻译中不要重复）

你让世间的黑暗少一些，光明多一些
泪水少一些，欢笑多一些
悲伤少一些，快乐多一些
脆弱少一些，坚强多一些
恐惧少一些，信仰多一些
绝望少一些，希望多一些
伤痛少一些，爱多一些
你让世界成为更好的世界

愿你有一个自由而坚定的灵魂
愿你有美丽的生活

生日快乐！

要求：
1，谢绝翻译软件
2，最好翻译得贴切一点，应当能看出来我是写给别人的生日祝福，呵呵
3，如果能翻译的信达雅，视情况追分

不尽感谢！
谢绝翻译软件！！

Answer 1

I can't follow you because time is always running so fast
I can't touch you because the world is so big
But when you sing in gentle or with passion
I can feel you near my hand
when you dance around full of enthusiasm
you are so clear to see

Because of you ,the world has more light rather than darkness,
more laughter rather than tears
more happiness rather than sadness
more strength rather than weakness
more belief rather than fear
more hope rather than despair
and more love rathe than hurt
It's you who make the world become a better one

(At last ,)I wish your soul will be free but still
and your life will be colorful and wonderful

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY "WITH MY LOYAL WISH
给你多加了几个词，希望别介意

Answer 2

Time too fast, I can not keep up with you
The other side too far / World too much, I touch you不着
But when you or gentle or passion in concert
I am in close proximity you / your fingertips
When you enthusiastically dancing rotation
You are such clarity
这个是第一句
You let the world in the dark a little less, some more bright
Fewer tears, laughter, more
A little less sad, a little more happy
Less vulnerable, more strong
Less fear, more faith
Less despair, and hope that some more
Pain less, love more
You let the world a better world

You would like to have a free and strong soul
You would like to have a beautiful life

Happy Birthday!
这个是第二句
帮你这么大忙
50分交出来

Answer 3

Time too fast, I can not keep up with you
The other side too far / World too much, I touch you不着
But when you or gentle or passion in concert
I am in close proximity you / your fingertips
When you enthusiastically dancing rotation
You are such clarity

(The two "passion", the Chinese can not find the right word, but we hope not to repeat in Translation)

You let the world in the dark a little less, some more bright
Fewer tears, laughter, more
A little less sad, a little more happy
Less vulnerable, more strong
Less fear, more faith
Less despair, and hope that some more
Pain less, love more
You let the world a better world

You would like to have a free and strong soul
You would like to have a beautiful life

Happy Birthday!

Answer 4

翻译:

Time is too quick and I fail to catch you
The other shore is too far/the world be too big and I could not touch you
But when you or light and soft or the intense emotion ground sing on stage
I feel you near at very short distance/the tentacle be within the reach of
When your intense emotion ground dance moves to revolve
You are thus clear clear

(Two"intense emotion", Chinese cans not find a suitable phrase, but hopes to translate medium don't repeat)

You make the blackness of world a little bit little, some much brighter
The tears is a little bit little and laugh heartily to have another some
The sorrow is a little bit little, happiness have another some
Weak a little bit little, some much stronger
Fear a little bit little, believe in to have another some
The despair is a little bit little, the hope have another some
Distress a little bit little, love to have another some
You let the world become better world

Wish you to have a freedom but firm soul
Wish you to have a beautiful life

Happy birthday!

Answer 5

The time is too quick, I cannot catch up with your the other shore to be too far/the world to be too big, I cannot touch your but when you either gentle or the fervor sings I to feel that you are near at hand/the tentacle to be possible and , when your fervor waves revolves you are understands you to let in society darkness few somewhat so clearly, bright many some tears few somewhat, laugh heartily many some sad few somewhat, joyful many some frail few somewhat, strong many some frightened few somewhat, believe many some to despair few somewhat, hoped that many some the grief are fewSome, like many some you enabling the world to become better world to be willing you to have one free and firm soul are willing you to have beautiful life happy birthday!

Answer 6

Time too fast, I can not keep up with you the other side too far / World too much, I touch you when you不着or gentle or passion to singing in close proximity, I feel you / your fingertips when you rotate your passion and dancing is such clarity ( The two "passion", the Chinese can not find the right word, but we hope not to repeat in the translation) you let the world in the dark a little less, some more promising fewer tears, laughter, more sad little less, some more than happy less vulnerable, Strong and more fear less, more faithLess despair, and hope that some more pain less, love more you make the world a better world you would like to have a free and firm to the soul of the beautiful life you have a happy birthday!