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He gives me great help
His name is Owen. He is a kind boy , who always help others when they are in trouble. He is my best friend and always help me.
Once, I failed the exam. I was so depressed at that time. When I was losing confidence in my study, he encouraged me and enabled me to work hard at my lessons.I express my gratitude to him. He is such a helpful boy.

Answer 1

My best friends is Owen , who always helps others when they are in trouble. He also gives his hand to me frequently.
Once, I failed in a exam,as a resalt I was so depressed. When I had lost confidence in my study, he encouraged me and enabled me to work hard with my lessons. I really want to express my gratitude to him for his assist.He is such a kind boy that I have never seen.

Answer 2

He gives me great helping
His name is Owen. He is a kind boy , he always help others when they are in troubles. He is my best friend and always helps me.
Once, I failed the exam. I was so depressed at that time. When I was losing confidence in my study, he encouraged me and enabled me to work hard at my lessons. I express my gratitude to him. He is such a helpful boy.

Answer 3

He gives me great help
His name is Owen. He is a kind boy who always help others when they are in trouble. He is my best friend and always help me.
Once, I failed the exam. I was so depressed at that time. When I was losing confidence with my study, he encouraged me and enabled me to work hard for my lessons. I express my gratitude to him. He is such a helpful boy.