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Being wealthy,Jack often wears cheap clothes and just drive a small car.He helped thousands of poor children so far.He spent a large number of money on their clothing and studies.Jack heard about the stories of these children as earlier sa five years ago."I knew nothing about them since I went to their country and met those children,"Jack said .He once went for a trip to Africa,and he was lost his way in a local village.Fortunate,a little girl appeared and helped him out.Then he got to konwing the poor life of the girl and many children like her."I want to do nothing for them."Jack said

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Li Peng was enjoying a springtime family picnic in a mountain while（1、改为when） it happened. His dog, Wang Cai, unexpected（2、改为unexpectedly） fell into melted snow, and it was washing（3、改为washed） away. Li Peng knew he had to be calm and act faster（4、改为fast）. All of the（5、改为a） sudden, he ran towards the edge of the river. When he got to（6、去掉to） there, he put his feet around a small tree, but（7、改为and） hang his body over the water to try and reach the dog. She（8、改为He） could see that the dog was struggling in the water. Finally he is（9、改为was） able （10、加上to） grab the dog and pull it out of the river.
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