回忆一下自己曾经度过的某一个美好的周末并写一篇短文记录下来。当时天气怎么样?你是怎样度过的?去哪儿

回忆一下自己曾经度过的某一个美好的周末并写一篇短文记录下来。当时天气怎么样?你是怎样度过的?去哪儿了?和谁一起去的?都干什么了?要求:语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确。大约7... 回忆一下自己曾经度过的某一个美好的周末并写一篇短文记录下来。当时天气怎么样?你是怎样度过的?去哪儿了?和谁一起去的?都干什么了?要求:语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确。大约70词左右。 展开
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Last Sunday, it was sunny and I had a great time. In the morning, I got up early. After breakfast I went to the zoo with Bob. We saw a dolphin show. We took some photos there and bought some souvenirs, too. Then, we had some hamburgers for lunch at KFC. We also had some fruit ice cream. After lunch, we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts. Then we went to a bookshop and bought some books. Next, I hung out with Bob in the street. Finally, tired but happy, we took the bus back to school. At the end of the day, we watched a movie about living in the future. 


试题分析:本题是一篇话题作文。根据所给话题可知本文主要是一般过去时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】该文使用了不少短语,为文章增色不少。如had a great time、got up early、took some photos、hung out with Bob、At the end of the day等等。
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