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寻一篇介绍伦敦的英文作文高二

Answer 1

　　s the capital and largest city of England and the United Kingdom (UK). It is Britain's most populous and Europe's second most populous metropolitan area. A major settlement for two millennia, its history goes back to its founding by the Romans, who called it Londinium. London's core, the ancient City of London, or the 'square mile' financial district, largely retains its mediaeval boundaries. Since at least the 19th century, the name "London" has also referred to the metropolis developed around this core. In modern times, the bulk of this conurbation forms the London region and the Greater London administrative area, with its own elected mayor and assembly.

Answer 2

London (none) is the capital of England,the first city and a port,is one of Europe's largest metropolitan area is one of the world's four and world-class city,with the United States,New York,Paris and Tokyo.London has not been British cities,it is not a formal city (the heartland of London,and Westminster city is the city),but since the 18th century because she has been one of the world's most important political,economic,cultural and arts and entertainment center,it is generally thought that she was a mistake.
From the beginning of the 20th century to 1801,as the British empire's capital,because in the London in politics,economy,culture,science and technology,etc,and the remarkable achievements as the world's largest city.
London is a diversified metropolis,the people from all over the world,with multiple ethnic,religious and cultural,The language used in the city more than 300 kinds.At the same time,London or world famous tourist resort,with numerous scenic spots and museum,etc.
London will host the 2012 Olympics in London

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怎么感觉你的这篇文章是介绍了伦敦，但感觉文中没有经典的句型，语法，和结构啊，不是很多啊