Question

帮忙判一下我的英语作文谢谢(初一下学期)8分

请用英语写一段话,描述你的一次旅行或参观经历.
具体内容应包括1时间2说到达的地点及交通方式3所看到的景物4所做的事情5感受或收获
要求:意思连贯 符合逻辑,字数不少于60词.
In last saturday I goes to the tiananmen square.
morning,we are gat up early and had breakfast,past one hours
we are goes by car .In the noon we are gat on the tiananmen quare .It is very good!I can see the mozhedong's picture.In the afternoon we are ate the dinner in restaurter.It is very good.
finsh,we are goes home.this my favourite's day.

Answer 1

In last saturday I go to the tiananmen square.
In the morning,we got up early and had breakfast,past one hours
we went there by car .At the noon, we went to the tiananmen quare .It is very nice!I can see the mozhedong's picture.Later in the afternoon, we ate the dinner in restaurter.It is very delicious.
In the end,we returned home.We enjoy myself very much and I want to go there again!
这样该避免离你原来的错误也会在于以表达上比较好，原因我真得懒得说了，不过本人对自己的英语水平还是比较那啥的。

Answer 2

基本每句都有错误！
第一句 goes应为got 是过去式
are 怎么会和 动词连用？ 有 是动词就不能带动词 不然动词应为进行时

Answer 3

语法错误也只有你能错地这么强大~~~~~~~~`

Answer 4

问题好多，有些介词用错，时态用错，句子表达错误等，不合格啊！

Answer 5

是favorite而不是 favourite this is my favorite's day

Answer 6

错误很多诶
刚刚看了下
和小学生的
作文差不多

诶