Question

英语 翻译 并 看是否有语病 指正（加分）

I think I shuould be leave~ Withdraw from the boredom of the game~I FELL UNHAPPY~ ~ but no one can replace me~~~~~adieux little Queen~~~`

翻译

你不懂我 我不懂你 我们之间夹杂太多令人厌烦的人和事 却承受不起压力 我不想哭 但是却压抑 邪恶的诅咒 我永远摆脱不了 你无法拯救我 亲爱的 人 我的明天在哪里 ~ 我不知道 只能重新被关起来不见天日~

Answer 1

前面的英文存在语病：
I think I should (去掉be) leave~ Withdrawn(过去分词) from the boredom of the game(其实这句表意不清，换成 Put and end to this boring game 比较好)~ I FEEL（注意是FEEL） UNHAPPY~~ But no one can replace me~~~~~adieux little Queen(adieux换成farewell较好)~~~

翻译如下：
我想我应该离开，从这场无聊的游戏中抽身。我不快乐，但却没有人能代替我。再见了，小公主。

后面那段中文的翻译如下:

You don't know me and I don't know you either. There are so many annoying people and things between us. These pressure is too much for me to afford. I don't wanna cry but to get depressed. This must be some kind of evil curse that I may never get rid of. You can't save me, my darling. What will my future be like? I have no idea. Maybe I should be locked in a place without any sunshine eternally.

PS：我发现先占座后答题才是明智之举 =.=

Answer 2

1.I think I should leave - withdraw from the boredom ofthe game - i feel unhappy- but no one can replace me - adieux little queen
我想我该离开了，从令人厌倦的游戏中脱身， 我感到很不高兴， 但是没有人能替代我，再见小女王

2.你不懂我 我不懂你 我们之间夹杂太多令人厌烦的人和事 却承受不起压力 我不想哭 但是却压抑 邪恶的诅咒 我永远摆脱不了 你无法拯救我 亲爱的 人 我的明天在哪里 ~ 我不知道 只能重新被关起来不见天日~

You do not understand me, and I do not understand you; There are too many boring things and persons between us;I cannot afford the pressure;I do not want to cry,but I am so depressed; I can not get rid of the evil curse,ever; You can not save me from all this; Darling,where is my future? - I do not know, and the only choice is to be prisoned and never see the sun again!

Answer 3

1.是should，而不是shuould！
I think I shuould be leave
我想我该离开了
Withdraw from the boredom of the game
离开这无聊的游戏
I FELL UNHAPPY
我不高兴
but no one can replace me
但是没有人能取代我
adieux 无此单词
little Queen
小皇后

Answer 4

我想我必须离开 〜
去退出这无聊的游戏〜
我不快的离开〜~
但是没有人可以取代我~~~~~
adieux(不认识,但根据语境是永别之类的)小皇后〜 〜

翻译
语法没问题,但美化不够

Answer 5

adieux告别，辞别。I think I shuould be leave应将leave改为leaving.I FELL 应为feel。FELL是砍倒、跌落。

Answer 6

我想我必须离开shuould 〜退出，无聊的游戏〜我被重重的摔到不满〜但没有人可以取代我~~~~~ adieux小皇后〜 〜 〜 `